SAF Posted October 16, 2021 Share Posted October 16, 2021 (edited) Now that v13's newest story gives quite an Undertale vibe and the previous one had some changes here and there, I'm starting to think of a Rejuv story but with Frisk, Undertale's MC, as the Interceptor. One of the storyline changes in v13 is how the bad future arc's climax choices are handled, so I might as well make a one-shot of how it goes with Frisk. For the record, Frisk is a non-binary in a male body (I'm going for Axel's) with they/them pronouns here. And before I forgot, Undertale spoiler alert. Read at your own risk. Reveal hidden contents "Don't even think about doing nothing!" Melanie's ultimatum made Melia shake in desperation. The princess had forced her to make an awfully hard choice in 30 seconds: either hand the Time Diamond to Melanie or use it to whisk her and Frisk away all the way back to right before Vivian's aborted ritual. Melia, for one, needed that Time Diamond to return to her own time. But on the other hand, she couldn't let Melanie do her deed and make everyone's lives in this timeline even more miserable. Panic ensued in her head… only to notice Frisk taking a deep breath as if they're going to say something. "It's a beautiful day outside," Frisk started their monologue, wanting to sound as serious as Sans at the start of his fight with Chara (in Frisk's body) as possible. "Crimson Sea is roaring, the castle's gloriously standing…" Frisk held Melia's hand tightly with her giving them a "Frisk, what the hell are you doing?" look, then looked up straight to Melanie. "On days like these, princess like you…" they paused with a serious look on their face, roughly equivalent to Sans' lack of pupils in his eye sockets. And a second later or two, Frisk delivered the punchline: "Should be burning in hell." "Ooh, that's cute," the princess rolled her eyes. But then a realization hit her. "But did you not hear me last time, you stupid cow? I told you that you weren't allowed to just 'do nothing'," she roared in a mix of anger and befuddlement. That's right, the whole Sans-style monologue turned out to be Frisk's clever ploy to waste time. Heck, nobody there could say anything, be it for the previous proposal or in response to Frisk's monologue. Not even Melia who was supposed to answer Melanie's proposal. Sorry for the shortness though. I did it on my phone and that's all I can think of for now. Edited October 18, 2021 by SAF 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chamomomile Posted October 21, 2021 Share Posted October 21, 2021 crawls out of my little hidey hole. hi i wrote fanfiction. please be nice i cry easily https://archiveofourown.org/works/34622878 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozetheeuwu Posted October 21, 2021 Share Posted October 21, 2021 On 10/21/2021 at 5:22 AM, chamomomile said: crawls out of my little hidey hole. hi i wrote fanfiction. please be nice i cry easily https://archiveofourown.org/works/34622878 Expand This is really sweet 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popular Post AceStrife Posted October 22, 2021 Popular Post Share Posted October 22, 2021 I shared it over in the Discord, but I completely forgot to share it here. When V13 released I was very impressed at the new Aevium forms and being new to spriting I wanted to try and make my own. I was more insecure about my work then, but I feel confident to share it now! Introducing my own Aevium Pokemon, meet the Fire/Grass type Falinks! Stranded on Terajuma Island, this group of Falinks had to adapt to its new environment over time. From scavenging in the jungle to scaling the mountain, the Falinks had to make the most out of what was available as their equipment began to degrade over time. Exchanging one of their shields for a spear to attack from afar and constructing new shields to defend up close, they have adopted a new fighting style for a more offensive formation. Though they've grown to rely more on their instincts than instruction, the Falinks will continue to follow their leader through thick and thin no matter the challenge that bars their path! 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popular Post Rozetheeuwu Posted October 27, 2021 Popular Post Share Posted October 27, 2021 Been meaning to draw these two 16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M4rduk Posted October 28, 2021 Share Posted October 28, 2021 Is it bad I wanna see someone make something with Melia dropping the F-Bomb on Spacea and Tiempa 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.A.M CXZ 007 Posted October 28, 2021 Share Posted October 28, 2021 actually i would like see that too i agreed with you man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ibrex2000 Posted October 31, 2021 Share Posted October 31, 2021 Happy Halloween ! couldn't finish this year's Halloween drawing of axel and prinplup so here's the one from last year 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Global Mods Popular Post Ice Cream Sand Witch Posted November 25, 2021 Global Mods Popular Post Share Posted November 25, 2021 Rejuvenescent (Pokemon Rejuvenation rap) It was the Interceptor's Wish that I come here to rap today Aquamarine drip is what I got on my array Before I showed up in this region it was neverwinter Now my ice cold bars are coming out of every printer When Team Xen crossed me I had their Madame X'd, that was a Decimation Went to the tournament to battle Adam next, got a standing ovation He thought he was a star till I put a blade through him, then he lost every cheerer Now he can think clearer, seeing the Inverse like a Darchlight Mirror My lines are like onions and ogres, this is the 3rd Layer While yours are one-dimensional rifts like an Angie prayer No cap, my level you're not anywhere near it I'm Nim in the Den of Souls and you're a Wandering Spirit You can try again with a Time Diamond But you'll never match me when I'm rhymin' I'm the Archetype all of you are imitating But when I rap in Garufan you struggle with translating Am I worried about Crescent? Yesn't. With her darkened views she's so incessant But I'll brighten up the world cause I'm iridescent And bring back her hope for the future, rejuvenescent 11 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leenu Posted November 25, 2021 Share Posted November 25, 2021 On 11/25/2021 at 5:12 PM, Ice Cream Sand Witch said: Rejuvenescent (Pokemon Rejuvenation rap) It was the Interceptor's Wish that I come here to rap today Aquamarine drip is what I got on my array Before I showed up in this region it was neverwinter Now my ice cold bars are coming out of every printer When Team Xen crossed me I had their Madame X'd, that was a Decimation Went to the tournament to battle Adam next, got a standing ovation He thought he was a star till I put a blade through him, then he lost every cheerer Now he can think clearer, seeing the Inverse like a Darchlight Mirror My lines are like onions and ogres, this is the 3rd Layer While yours are one-dimensional rifts like an Angie prayer No cap, my level you're not anywhere near it I'm Nim in the Den of Souls and you're a Wandering Spirit You can try again with a Time Diamond But you'll never match me when I'm rhymin' I'm the Archetype all of you are imitating But when I rap in Garufan you struggle with translating Am I worried about Crescent? Yesn't. With her darkened views she's so incessant But I'll brighten up the world cause I'm iridescent And bring back her hope for the future, rejuvenescent Expand I read you Desolation Rap previously, and your ability to put game events into rhymes is outstanding. Would love to see more of these someday. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blinci Posted November 26, 2021 Share Posted November 26, 2021 On 11/25/2021 at 5:12 PM, Ice Cream Sand Witch said: Rejuvenescent (Pokemon Rejuvenation rap) It was the Interceptor's Wish that I come here to rap today Aquamarine drip is what I got on my array Before I showed up in this region it was neverwinter Now my ice cold bars are coming out of every printer When Team Xen crossed me I had their Madame X'd, that was a Decimation Went to the tournament to battle Adam next, got a standing ovation He thought he was a star till I put a blade through him, then he lost every cheerer Now he can think clearer, seeing the Inverse like a Darchlight Mirror My lines are like onions and ogres, this is the 3rd Layer While yours are one-dimensional rifts like an Angie prayer No cap, my level you're not anywhere near it I'm Nim in the Den of Souls and you're a Wandering Spirit You can try again with a Time Diamond But you'll never match me when I'm rhymin' I'm the Archetype all of you are imitating But when I rap in Garufan you struggle with translating Am I worried about Crescent? Yesn't. With her darkened views she's so incessant But I'll brighten up the world cause I'm iridescent And bring back her hope for the future, rejuvenescent Expand Very well made! Reminds me that someone made a cover for Uranium, someone should make one for Rejuvenation someday! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Global Mods Popular Post Nympulse Posted December 2, 2021 Global Mods Popular Post Share Posted December 2, 2021 Hit the [SLAY] button 18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulN7 Posted December 3, 2021 Share Posted December 3, 2021 On 12/2/2021 at 11:17 AM, Cerise said: Hit the [SLAY] button Expand *Past choosen MC approves this* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraElizabeth-J Posted December 12, 2021 Share Posted December 12, 2021 Hello! I'm currently working on a comic adaption of the game, which It will be based on my in-game experience. The MC is my own character, and some of their Pokemon will even have some of lore and show development through the story. If you're interested, the comic is avaiable to read here: https://theinterceptorjourney.thecomicseries.com/ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.A.M CXZ 007 Posted December 12, 2021 Share Posted December 12, 2021 sorry what pokemon is robin.but i really like the drawing.and the way their expressions are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraElizabeth-J Posted December 12, 2021 Share Posted December 12, 2021 On 12/12/2021 at 5:00 AM, Ram Cxz 007 said: sorry what pokemon is robin.but i really like the drawing.and the way their expressions are Expand Thanks! :) Robin is a Scorbunny! Sometimes I have troubles drawing bipedal Pokemon in my style so, to make things easier for me, I drew him looking like a regular rabbit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popular Post Stardustrei Posted December 12, 2021 Popular Post Share Posted December 12, 2021 Been strugling with this game for the longest, but I've decided it's time to beat it. Going to update this drawing with my full team as I go, and draw some other journey related events. 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evi Crystal Posted December 12, 2021 Share Posted December 12, 2021 This looks cool. Nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.A.M CXZ 007 Posted December 12, 2021 Share Posted December 12, 2021 On 12/12/2021 at 5:18 AM, SaraElizabeth-J said: Thanks! :) Robin is a Scorbunny! Sometimes I have troubles drawing bipedal Pokemon in my style so, to make things easier for me, I drew him looking like a regular rabbit. Expand did you complete the next part.i am eager to read the next one ill be waiting i like how the story is going even though i know the complete plot its kinda refreshing i think pokemon like wingull looks amazing in your style so i think bipedal is really difficult in your style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraElizabeth-J Posted December 12, 2021 Share Posted December 12, 2021 On 12/12/2021 at 12:29 PM, Ram Cxz 007 said: did you complete the next part.i am eager to read the next one ill be waiting i like how the story is going even though i know the complete plot its kinda refreshing i think pokemon like wingull looks amazing in your style so i think bipedal is really difficult in your style. Expand I'm planning to start to work on the next few pages today. I should be able to finish them in a couple of days (: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozetheeuwu Posted December 13, 2021 Share Posted December 13, 2021 (edited) For the last few months I've been working on a fancomic for Pokemon Rejuv! It took a while between redesigning my character, art style changes and art block but here's the first part. I refused to draw anything else but these pages for the last month here's the cover page, you can read the rest of the chapter on ao3 (or my tumblr, I have the same username there! I'll also post every 10 pages I finish there) https://archiveofourown.org/works/35673034/chapters/88944703 Now that this part is finished I feel more motivated to draw the rest. Edited December 14, 2021 by Rozetheeuwu 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaraElizabeth-J Posted December 13, 2021 Share Posted December 13, 2021 Ey! You're working on a Rejuv Fancomic too! :D And good luck! It looks good so far 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.A.M CXZ 007 Posted December 13, 2021 Share Posted December 13, 2021 On 12/13/2021 at 1:05 AM, Rozetheeuwu said: here's the cover page, you can read the rest of the chapter on ao3 (or my tumblr, I have the same username there! I'll also post every 10 pages I finish there) https://archiveofourown.org/works/35673034/chapters/88944703 Now that this part is finished I feel more motivated to draw the rest. Expand i cried when i read this. the arts are really good and the emotion of zorua and pangoro was shown very clearly i await for the next one On 12/13/2021 at 2:49 AM, SaraElizabeth-J said: Ey! You're working on a Rejuv Fancomic too! :D And good luck! It looks good so far Expand i await for yours too!!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozetheeuwu Posted December 13, 2021 Share Posted December 13, 2021 On 12/13/2021 at 2:49 AM, SaraElizabeth-J said: Ey! You're working on a Rejuv Fancomic too! :D And good luck! It looks good so far Expand Thank you! Good luck on yours too! On 12/13/2021 at 3:13 AM, Ram Cxz 007 said: i cried when i read this. the arts are really good and the emotion of zorua and pangoro was shown very clearly i await for the next one Expand Thank you! I really enjoyed drawing their expressions! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aiko Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 These comics are so cool!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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