Nefalem Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 Typhlosion has too much Contrast between Black and White. Flames maybe ok but not really for my eyes sry. Charizards Flame is too dark. And the yellow tail doesn't look really good at all :/ .. Try this proggy : http://www.humanbalance.net/gale/us/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 (edited) how about these puppies also what a jesus bird, sorry if the question is stupid but i am having trouble understanding the references another thin, this is my idea for a new shiny pikachu however on a more serial note i was thinking of making a zoroark with golden super saiyen hair what do you guys think about that Typhlosion has too much Contrast between Black and White. Flames maybe ok but not really for my eyes sry. Charizards Flame is too dark. And the yellow tail doesn't look really good at all :/ .. Try this proggy : http://www.humanbalance.net/gale/us/ ok what do you suggest for the belly and tail,thirdbird said i should try a blue color (like my gyrados for the tail/tummy what do you think as for typhlosian should i use lighter colors for his body and semi darker for his flame Edited April 11, 2014 by codelancelot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nefalem Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 (edited) Jesus Bird is simply the name of Pidgeot in a game walktrough Watch this : http://www.joystiq.com/2014/02/22/twitch-plays-pokemon-its-history-highlights-and-bird-jesus/ This Pidgeot remembers me of the german flag .. It's torso is too dark sry :/ Huge contrast to the red. If you do Charizard you should do Charmander and Charmelon first .. Just to have an idea of the colors to use. Begin coloring the tail with some darker blue and enlight the color slightly to the tail top Edited April 11, 2014 by Nefalem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 Jesus Bird is simply the name of Pidgeot in a game walktrough Watch this : http://www.joystiq.com/2014/02/22/twitch-plays-pokemon-its-history-highlights-and-bird-jesus/ This Pidgeot remembers me of the german flag .. It's torso is too dark sry :/ Huge contrast to the red. If you do Charizard you should to Charmander and Charmelon first .. Just to have an idea of the colors to use. Begin coloring the tail with some darker blue and enlight the color slightly to the tail top i actually did do charmelian before hand btw what do you think of my pikachu idea lol also what about a golden zoroark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nefalem Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 No not a golden zoroak .___. ... And no sayan Pikachu .. Try this evolution chain first. Too many projects make no sense. One by one .. Pantimos : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators Amethyst Posted April 12, 2014 Author Administrators Share Posted April 12, 2014 Mr. Mime is something I'll have to do myself-- it's going to serve a specific purpose later. Errr... Maybe I´m the only one who doesn´t know how a squire scyther should look... But how should a squire scyther look like? xD Jazce posted one rendition of it on the first page here-- But, a squire is someone who's training to be a knight, and in the meantime tends to service knights. It might have some silver as like scraps of armor, but as a medieval job is probably predominately brown. I think the blades should definitely stay silver but I don't think we need the redness on its body like in the sprite posted early. That might be better of as a duller grey, or maybe a different shade of brown from the rest of it. Fixed ? I'm... not honestly seeing that much of a difference in the Goldeen/Seeking, but the contrast in the shades on Snorlax is much better. The Outline is now probably too light against the darker shades though (it looks all right against the lighter parts) so you'd have to draw over those parts with a darker colour. Consider matching the brightnesses to the outline it uses on its belly, offset accordingly. As promised here's a very quick demonstration on basic recolouring with GG-- I'll do some more complicated ones later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thirdbird Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Finally done with Venomoth. And I tried Graphics Gale, but it was too hard. I roll with #TeamMSPaint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freya Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Hi Ame! I posted my fixed-up Articuno sprites on the previous page, but it seem's you've missed it. I'll quote it so you can just review it here. Could I have some feedback please? Thanks! So I tried making the edits you mentioned. The gray I used for the outline blends in with the forum's dark color, so maybe go to the images' urls? I was having a little trouble shading the back sprite's tail. Any feedback or assistance is welcomed c: 144s.gif144bs.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nefalem Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 (edited) Thanks Ame yeah the Goldeen turquoise outlines have been smoothed a bit I admit it is not really clear ^^ Outlines done Smoothed the borders again ^^ Edited April 12, 2014 by Nefalem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brockze Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 That Kakuna is way too dark red. The left side of the frontsprite becomes really hard to see... On a different point, I finished off the Sycther line! Top is male, bottom female. I just thought that the female should really look different than the male... plus these two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nefalem Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Thanks fixed. Good Sycther's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators Amethyst Posted April 12, 2014 Author Administrators Share Posted April 12, 2014 Those Scythers look fantastic. Putting in and marking off Scyther, Venomoth and Golduck. Hi Ame! I posted my fixed-up Articuno sprites on the previous page, but it seem's you've missed it. I'll quote it so you can just review it here. Could I have some feedback please? Thanks! I totally did, sorry, thanks for bringing it to my attention! The front sprite is looking pretty solid but you're right, the tail on the back sprite needs some work. Notice how on the front, the lines running down the tail use a lighter shade where the light hits it. By contrast, the back sprite currently has all of the lines as a very dark colour all the way down through the tail. Use the lighter shades of grey where the tail is hit by the light, and don't be afraid to fade it in with a few pixels at the 'corners' to make it blend better. Thanks Ame yeah the Goldeen turquoise outlines have been smoothed a bit I admit it is not really clear ^^ Outlines done Goldeen looks better. I think I'd still like to see the initial white > black/black > white concept for that line though because I think Seaking might look really cool that way. So I don't want to commit to putting this Goldeen in yet-- but if that doesn't work out, this is usable. The Weedle line was already completed before and has been marked off on the first post since before this topic was made... Snorlax's silver outlines are still too light I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nefalem Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Darkened outlines 3rd Time : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thirdbird Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 MEWTWOOOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 i will upload ekans soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinny Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 MEWTWOOOOO This Mewtwo reminds me of this: I'm so Pink right now... i will upload ekans soon That's the 4th gen sprite isn't? You should be doing the 5th gen ones, ya know :I Unless i'm missing something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 This Mewtwo reminds me of this: I'm so Pink right now... That's the 4th gen sprite isn't? You should be doing the 5th gen ones, ya know :I Unless i'm missing something... nope that is a 1st gen sprite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinny Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 nope that is a 1st gen sprite . . . . No, i'm pretty sure this is the backsprite you should be working on: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikzal Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 nope that is a 1st gen sprite It might be a gen 1 pokemon, but not a gen 1 or 5 sprite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 It might be a gen 1 pokemon, but not a gen 1 or 5 sprite. oh i used the shiny sprite from the battlers folder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikzal Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 oh i used the shiny sprite from the battlers folder You have to use the non-shiny sprite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 (edited) You have to use the non-shiny sprite can you guys tell me what you think before i go ahead and redo it in 5th gen sprite _____update________ well i guess that means i have to redo these as well but before that i would also like an opinion on them (also try to be as honest as possible) Edited April 12, 2014 by codelancelot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thirdbird Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 I tried... @codelancelot I think they're all pretty good. I especially like the color of the 2nd one, but it isn't shaded that well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brockze Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Uhm, If I remember correctly, I think Mew's already done. Just use the list on the first page for guidance. The things that are crossed off have already been done. In my opinion though, the 3rd one is best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codelancelot Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 (edited) i will upload ekans soon I tried... @codelancelot I think they're all pretty good. I especially like the color of the 2nd one, but it isn't shaded that well. Uhm, If I remember correctly, I think Mew's already done. Just use the list on the first page for guidance. The things that are crossed off have already been done. In my opinion though, the 3rd one is best. how about arbok and thanks for the feedback also she said mew was acceptable as is but i wanted to give some ideas for a different mew Edited April 12, 2014 by codelancelot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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