Arkhi Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Even generally in Reborn, there is a lacking number of females. Guess we gotta conquest & convert some to our ways. Anyway, there is only one issue I notice. Beverly knows about her power, but how does she? The Pillar arose, but her power seems to be given to her without any sort of explanation. Is there any backstory to how she figured it out?Or did she just forget? Because that could be a valid reason, seeing as her power does just that to people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustytengo Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 yeah lets go with the whole forgetting how she found out thing cause that works(because i totally forgot to come up with something for that, and i like it as well). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flux Posted May 25, 2014 Author Share Posted May 25, 2014 Posting this here for Snap Crackle Pop, who couldn't seem to get on this thread earlier due to server problems.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Character Name: Alice FeinsteinGender: FemaleAge: 18Ability of the character: Alice has the ability to absorb and manipulate energy, although, it is within a limited range, the farther away, the weaker and less accurate her powers are. She can solidify it so it's razor sharp or absorb it to heal minor scratches and nicks. She has a bit of difficulty regulating it and controlling it, however, and if she uses it, she is in risk of absorbing too much or running out of energy, both of which have pretty bad consequences so she is actively practising it so that she can effectively use it in a survival situation. Since she can solidify the energy, she can use it as a way to lift or move things or stop something from falling or moving. It's very taxing on her body though, and if she is extremely mad, worried or annoyed, her powers might go a bit hay wire and act out on small things around her.Appearance: Being short for her age, she stands at 5'2 and is generally small in size, so she's often mistaken to be much younger than she actually is. She's not particularly distinctive, she's slightly fox-faced with long black hair that is often tied back in a low ponytail. If not for her mismatched eyes she'd be pretty forgettable, her left eye being a very dark grey-blue and her right eye pale greyish green but it's hard to notice as she keeps her bangs covering her right eye. She wears a red shirt under a longish black jacket paired with blue jeans and medium length leather boots. She keeps a old pocket watch on a long silver chain around her neck and under her shirt.Personality: Alice is pretty quiet and is more inclined to watch and listen than participate in most things, despite this, she enjoys playing tricks on people like swapping the salt with the sugar. She finds it even more amusing as most people would not suspect it to be her doing. She is level headed and very smart, she also has a knack for seeing patterns, if something manages to shake her, however, she is often deeply effected. Alice has a tendency to avoid her own personal problems and often tries to help the people she knows and likes. She doesn't handle pressure very well and can make poor choices if she's emotionally high strung. She also has a lot of silly quirks and fears, and she often starts laughing out of the blue at a thought that occurs to her or as a compensation method. In a way, she is abnormally mature for her age and in another way, she is very immature and childish.Background: Alice had a pretty good life, had a good family and was financially wealthy, she also was very close to her identical twin, Elizabeth. About 3 days after the tower rose, she and her sister were caught up in a armed robbery at a jewelry shop and they, along with the others in the store at the time, were taken as hostages. The robber there was an Awakened and he had lost all sanity. Elizabeth provoked him and in response, the robber killed her with his electrical manipulation abilities and thus killed her. Alice, for understandable reasons, snapped and, without meaning to or knowing what she did at first, created a wall of energy gathered from the electricity and forced him against the wall on the far side of the room, knocking him out. She ran out of the store and did not look back, she's constantly on the run.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Right now, I'm still not exactly sure what you mean by "energy." When you say she can absorb it, what is she absorbing it from? Is it literally the life energy (or ATP?) of people and other life, or is it more like electrical power from machines? I would also recommend narrowing down your ability a little more, seeing as right now she seems to have telekinesis, minor healing, protection (like the barrier you mentioned), as well as another attack form (the razor sharp solidifying). I may change my opinion on this if you explain where exactly this "energy" is coming from, though. @rustytengo Looks good to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 hmmm, me wonders why you picked Viktor for the group. Funnily enough it he would fit in pretty nicely, seeing as Aries would be a good code name for him. He was a SWAT team member (and a solider before that.) and Aries is also the God of Bloodshed. (by the way just throwing this out there lol.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 *Ares Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 whoops, kill me lol. Spelling not my strong suit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snap Crackle Pop Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 Still though, interesting point :3 Actually, the powers of some of the awakened match up with the powers of the Greek Gods. That is a funny coincidence~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flux Posted May 31, 2014 Author Share Posted May 31, 2014 hmmm, me wonders why you picked Viktor for the group. Funnily enough it he would fit in pretty nicely, seeing as Aries would be a good code name for him. He was a SWAT team member (and a solider before that.) and Aries is also the God of Bloodshed. (by the way just throwing this out there lol.) Well, for now he's not planned as a full member of Olympus actually. The option is open in the future, but for now he'll mostly be associated with them. He'll probably end up assigned to BOA to start with, though may not end up being permanent... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 We will see, just thougt I would point it out. Viktor is willing to do quite a bit to make sure his family survives, so I imagine he wil stick with them even if he doesn't fully argee with them. ((basically Hades reasons that he should join, the one about his family being protected was the only reason he said yes.)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 Flux, is it OK if i give my PC the nickname of "The Guardian"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flux Posted May 31, 2014 Author Share Posted May 31, 2014 Flux, is it OK if i give my PC the nickname of "The Guardian"? I suppose, if there's good reasoning behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 (edited) how about this: My PC and an "Awakened" NPC or someone else's PC meet up, there's a Danger to both of them, and my OC protects the NPC/other PC from said danger. how's that sound for a Nickname-worthy Event? Edited May 31, 2014 by K_H Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 well, if we're givin out nicknames and alliases to our PCs, then I think it only fitting that anver be given the name "Hot ColdMan" (Yes like from MGS:peace walker, though Hot-Cold Man is also acceptable) It's pretty self explanatory as to how it fits him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 I figured the cops etc would call them by names kinda like how they do with noeworthy crimnals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snap Crackle Pop Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 MGS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flux Posted June 1, 2014 Author Share Posted June 1, 2014 I figured the cops etc would call them by names kinda like how they do with noeworthy crimnals. I was thinking of actually assigning you all numbers for the government to define you by, like how Hades is #0001. The police probably would be more prone to using nicknames, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 I posted, by the way. Did you miss it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 numbers is definitly better for government use like the higher-ups. I like that they have a pedestrian name the cops use though. Reallly adds something I think. Used Crimson Tide cause it soounds really ominous and they would probably have such a name for a guy who can kill people using their own blood, ans his blood. ( also Crimson Tide was the name of my Dad's Worms team back when we played it all the time, really weird thing to name it after, but I get sentimental like that sometimes lol.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flux Posted June 1, 2014 Author Share Posted June 1, 2014 I posted, by the way. Did you miss it? No, I just wasn't sure if you wanted me to intercede or if you had something planned out. Same thing for rusty right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 No plans, just trying to get myself in. School+work+illness+a busted laptop are slowing my replies down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 really want to post lol, kinda regret accepting that deal right off the bat lol. Though I have a feeling Hades would utterly destroy me, so glad at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustytengo Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 nope nothing planed for me either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snap Crackle Pop Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 I was stalking through the profiles of the characters () and I realized that Viktor also has mis-matched eyes, that was not on purpose, sorry! I normally give all my rp characters mis-matched eyes for the fun of it, I didn't notice that before hand >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flux Posted June 1, 2014 Author Share Posted June 1, 2014 really want to post lol, kinda regret accepting that deal right off the bat lol. Though I have a feeling Hades would utterly destroy me, so glad at the same time. I was hoping you might resist a little more, but your intuition was correct. Hades is quite possibly the most powerful character in this RP. @Rusty I've got to go for a while, so you're not included in this next post, but feel free to continue from where you left off on your own if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chim Posted June 1, 2014 Share Posted June 1, 2014 I'm having some internet issues so I might be slow with responding. Opening Reborn and posting this took about 30-40 minutes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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