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What do you feel is my greatest strength as a host with this RP? What is my greatest flaw? (Don't hold anything back. I want honest opinions if I am to improve as a host, and I promise I won't be angry or offended.)

the good: most of your post has quality, well writen and easy to follow. never a dull moment when you update. you always bring something new to the table when you post.

the kinda bad: the updating of your thread.

With the above in mind, what is your overall opinion of my work as host of this RP?

You're doing fine, don't worry about it. just keep doing what you're doing.

If there is one thing you could change in this RP to make it more interesting and enjoyable for you, what would it be?

it's seems you know what you are doing, im satisfied. and besides my idea would probably change it for the worst XD

Do you like the method of hosting I am using to tell the story? If not, what would you rather see?

so far so good.. move along..

Do you enjoy the plot itself so far?

i really enjoy the rescue mission.

Which NPC(s) do you find to be the most believable character(s)? (Not necessarily your favorite.)

Cedric, Ms.Archer... they're schemers,both fitting to be the leader of their own respected groups.

Which NPC(s) do you find to be the most unbelievable? (AKA which NPC(s) need the most work in terms of character?)

none that i have read so far.

Which NPC would you most like to learn more about?

that teleporting guy from the start, his name is blue right? like what is he?

Which NPC is your favorite and why?

Beetle's grandpa.. i have a thing for bad ass old people.

Which NPC is your least favorite and why?

the bartender, he still owes Ace a beer.

Which character do you feel you would get along with best if they really existed? Worst? (Can be a PC or NPC)

idk someone who can tolerate Ace.

Which character do you think is the strongest? (Can be a PC or NPC)

the quiet ones are the dangerous.. i think Cedric Sterling has something up his sleeves.

but for the time being, it's Zweiss, seeing he can control gravity for pete sake..

Which of the established groups would you personally like to see succeed? (The government, Utopia, the Organization, Beetle's group... Does not necessarily have to be the group your PC is affiliated with.)

Utopia... yes you heard me, the organization is a great group and all, but i like to think of them as a neutral faction. the good resistance if you will. now utopia on the other hand.. if they get shove by the government or any other group, they push back.they take what they want, when they want. this cult means business, and i like the whole false savior of the awakened, it's almost lke i want to switch sides...the God of speed joins Zweiss. hmm i like the sound of that..*ehem*

If you were to make a prediction about something in the future of the RP, what would you say?

can't tell, the future is blurry.

If you could ask me any question about something related to this RP and I would answer it, what would you want to know? (Not saying I'll actually answer these... but I'm curious.)

i rarely ask something.

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What do you feel is my greatest strength as a host with this RP? What is my greatest flaw? (Don't hold anything back. I want honest opinions if I am to improve as a host, and I promise I won't be angry or offended.)

a strength would be Your detail and ability to make quality posts consistently. Your flaw is honestly the amount of time in between updates that we're kept waiting- though no one can honestly blame you; school is simply a massively time eating machine.

With the above in mind, what is your overall opinion of my work as host of this RP?

You're doing pretty well B) keep it up

If there is one thing you could change in this RP to make it more interesting and enjoyable for you, what would it be?

Hmmm... maybe more group interaction moments? some people ended up getting glossed over a little hard, and while I personally am not one of them, I still know they did because of solo interactions that moved rather slowly in comparison to group ones between multiple PCs

Do you like the method of hosting I am using to tell the story? If not, what would you rather see?

no complaints here...

Do you enjoy the plot itself so far?

hells yeah!

Which NPC(s) do you find to be the most believable character(s)? (Not necessarily your favorite.)

didn't really pay too much attention to NPCs other than as they interacted with Anver himself... in fact, I only read those update sections actually regarding him to tell the truth after a while...

Which NPC(s) do you find to be the most unbelievable? (AKA which NPC(s) need the most work in terms of character?)

Can't answer it, mate. same reason above, it would be like a shot in the dark

Which NPC would you most like to learn more about?

*Cough* Alistair! *Cough*

Which NPC is your favorite and why?

ehh... don't have one.

Which NPC is your least favorite and why?

Alistair and everyone aligned in Utopia... totally not biased at all here, nope... not one bit.

Which character do you feel you would get along with best if they really existed? Worst? (Can be a PC or NPC)

lols, I should've read more of the updates... but I guess... Anver himself? as for worst... Bettle, cause the fucker's gonna betray us at some point as you clearly have hinted at

Which character do you think is the strongest? (Can be a PC or NPC)

Hmm... damn, that's a tough one. theres a lot of chracters with some pretty volatile powers... though I'd thin it would be a toss up between Zues/Poseidon, Victor, and Anver at this time

Which of the established groups would you personally like to see succeed? (The government, Utopia, the Organization, Beetle's group... Does not necessarily have to be the group your PC is affiliated with.)

... none. lets have a revolution occur, and no one succeeds... but instead they must come together

If you were to make a prediction about something in the future of the RP, what would you say?

If you could ask me any question about something related to this RP and I would answer it, what would you want to know? (Not saying I'll actually answer these... but I'm curious.)

will finish last two later. I'll get Anver's stuff to you later as well
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So just a curious question for you all: If I were to post music that I feel fits the scene along with some of my updates in the RP, how many of you would actually listen to it as you read the scene? I'm wondering if you think it's worth it or not...

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I'm often checking the RP in class or when I tell my parents I'm studying, so I rarely if ever listen to the music. Personally I prefer when there's no music posted, as I have an overactive imagination. I essentially see everything I read as a movie complete with bgm.

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Just checking up on this... It's been about two weeks. Is everything coming along with the two of you? The info on Anver's family is going to be important for what I had planned for the start of the chapter.

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Well, while I wait for stuff, I suppose I'll answer Ark's question.

If you could ask me any question about something related to this RP and I would answer it, what would you want to know? (Not saying I'll actually answer these... but I'm curious.)
What's the theme/song for this RP? c:

As of now, I'm staying with the song you picked out earlier, and it's likely to stay that way. I can't imagine a piece that could be any better suited to this RP. It gives a perfect contrast between Utopia and the Organization in my opinion. Here's the song for any interested who may have forgotten:

In addition, I've started picking out some character themes, so I'll be posting those up periodically for anyone interested. Zeus, Alister, Zweiss, and Cedric all have something that may potentially be their theme. I'm going to look around a bit more before any final decisions. Some are more certain than others at this point.

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Sweet lord, I keep forgetting.

Really sorry bout that flux- I'm making getting the info a priority right this moment. You'll have it either by tonight or tomorrow.

*Cracks fingers in preparation*

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So just a curious question for you all: If I were to post music that I feel fits the scene along with some of my updates in the RP, how many of you would actually listen to it as you read the scene? I'm wondering if you think it's worth it or not...

I was just taking a pause for emphasis in answering this question. Heh. Sorry for the delayed response.

You know me- I'd listen to the music during the scene and, if I like it, beyond that. Still, Jory's comment about including music could be limiting to the experience. It's food for thought, but I personally would enjoy this.

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I'm thinking I'll include music, but put it in a spoiler so that people who don't want to see it don't have to. I've got the information I need now, so I'll work on getting chapter 2 up sometime soon. Faust and Jory, if you could finish up those questions, I would very much appreciate it. I'm curious about that stuff. ^_^

The first character theme will probably be included with the initial post of Chapter two as well.

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I'm thinking I'll include music, but put it in a spoiler so that people who don't want to see it don't have to. I've got the information I need now, so I'll work on getting chapter 2 up sometime soon. Faust and Jory, if you could finish up those questions, I would very much appreciate it. I'm curious about that stuff. ^_^

The first character theme will probably be included with the initial post of Chapter two as well.

If you were to make a prediction about something in the future of the RP, what would you say?

Utopia is going to begin making preparations for a second holocaust in order to install the Awakened individuals as the master race. The organization will be attacked and destroyed from the inside out faster than any of the Rebel-Allied PCs can do anything to possibly prevent it, due to Blue's presumed betrayal scene you put in the end of this chapter, and at the end of the day, those surviving fighters from the Organization will have to team up with Olympus and the US government in order to prevent the beginnings of a whole sale slaughter of the normal human race

Calling it, right now...

If you could ask me any question about something related to this RP and I would answer it, what would you want to know? (Not saying I'll actually answer these... but I'm curious.)

hmmm...have the awakened popped up in any other country in the world other than the US so far? Also, are there any other, probably smaller and more fragmented, groups of Awakened other than the Rebellion (Or the organization, whatever it's called, I wasn't paying attention), Olympus, and Utopia? if so, how numerous are they?

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Well, that's a question I think I can answer without giving away any spoilers. The Awakened have not appeared in any other country for the most part. Though at some point, you guys will likely be leaving the U.S., at least temporarily. There are smaller groups of Awakened, as you would imagine, but the groups I have named are going to be the most important in the development of the RP. There may be one or two larger groups that you have yet to see, though...

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Might be a little bit before Chapter 2 comes up. My internet access is going to be a bit spotty over the next few days, so I'll just work on some extra planning of the chapter in the meantime. Thanks for the patience.

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Just updating again to let you all know that I haven't forgotten about this. Some of you may have seen my post in the Aftermath thread, but basically I've got graduation coming this week and life has been hectic lately. I've got final presentations to give and a speech to write, so it's been tough to get on Reborn what little amount I have been lately. After graduation, I should have a lot more free time, so I should be able to handle this RP a lot easier. Thanks for hanging with me, and hopefully I haven't lost any of you in the wait time.

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congrats Flux.. Good luck with the speech and all, just settle what you need to settle IRL and we'll be waiting for this thread to return. btw, this RP is one year old now.

And it's only one chapter long... Oops.

Thanks, though. I'll try to get on top of things ASAP. I've already got most of this chapter planned out, so things should go at least a little bit more smoothly.

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All right, I'm done graduating and all that, so let's get a final head count before starting this up again to make sure everyone is still around! Those who don't respond here can expect a pm about it.

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