Will Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 (edited) This is a story of the players in the Pokémon Online Reborn Server, based on one fateful night when Amethyst wasn't online, and some of us struggled to survive in a desolate, post-apocalyptic, leaderless world and I decided, why not make this into a book/comic? Originally starting in deciding which Pokémon we'd eat first to survive, then ultimately turning into utter chaos. I'll be uploading pages I get done onto this post. Happy reading! (Ideas and criticism very welcome!) 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(Don't worry if +Infinitas didn't explain what everything is or whatever, this is more unexplained thingies) Book 1 - Hoenn 1 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg1.jpg 2 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg2.jpg 3 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg3.jpg 4 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg4.jpg 5 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg5.jpg 6 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg6EDIT.jpg 7 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg7.jpg 8 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg8.jpg 9 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg9.jpg 10 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg10.jpg 11 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg11.jpg 12 - http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/plusInfinitas%20Chronicles/InfCh1-Pg12.jpg Edited October 19, 2013 by Will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stars Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 Wow, three of Amethyst's favorite pokemon in that picture. =o I dig the character art. I look forward to seeing how this goes. (Bidoof should be the first to go, methinks.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Kitty Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 I like them. Especially mineee. <333 I look sooooo cute. <333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 12, 2010 Author Share Posted July 12, 2010 I only have 500K of space for images...? How am I supposed to get the rest of the pictures up here? (I just finished page 1, by the way... (In order to be read, my pictures have to be rather large...)) <( [i]This shall require [b]intense[/b] brainpower...[/i] ) I [i]suppose[/i] I could upload them to facebook... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stars Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 Photobucket? That's probably safer than attaching them here since we have an established record of the site going poof. (What is this, the fourth iteration now?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 12, 2010 Author Share Posted July 12, 2010 Ok, Thanks, I'll use Photobucket! Here's [i][b][u]Page 1[/u][/b][/i] Hope you enjoy it! [i](Remember: Ideas [b]and[/b] criticism [b][u]very[/u][/b] welcome!)[/i] [url="http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/Infinitas-Pg1.jpg"]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/S...finitas-Pg1.jpg[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Kitty Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 I'm jealous of your art~ But I can't judge on just the first page!!! Put more up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stars Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 You might consider adding in the text (other than the title) on your computer, although it's not a big issue since your handwriting is easy to read. That aside, yay for chibi Ame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Kitty Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 Haha, funny, Stars, cuz I just texted Ame and called him AmeChiibi. xP I think his handwriting makes it more unique. Just saying~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 12, 2010 Author Share Posted July 12, 2010 I was always too lazy to learn how to add text, although I'm guessing I can do it on MS Paint... And Kitty, give me time, these take a little while, also thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Kitty Posted July 12, 2010 Share Posted July 12, 2010 Will, you must know that I'm a very impatient person. x.x And you tease us with just a page. No fair. xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mashew Posted July 13, 2010 Share Posted July 13, 2010 lol cant wait for it to be done Will tht was a fun night! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 13, 2010 Author Share Posted July 13, 2010 Lol, sorry, Kitty, but I'm starting Guitar lessons tomorrow so I might be a bit slow on productions... And, lol, it was Mashew... (Sorry, that this one's mostly words, look at it as a... prologue of sorts...) Here's [b][i][u]Page 2[/u][/i][/b] Hope you enjoy it! [i](Remember: Ideas [b]and[/b] criticism [b][u]very[/u][/b] welcome!)[/i] [url="http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/Infinitas-Pg2_0001.jpg"]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/S...as-Pg2_0001.jpg[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AZKnight Posted July 13, 2010 Share Posted July 13, 2010 Ah yes, Amethyst discovered Pokemon.....in his backyard >_> Not much to really say about the first two pages since between them there are only three images. And those are all pretty standard, nothing too exciting happening yet. I'll have to hold my judgment until later when there is more to critique, like interaction between characters or action poses. I think the story that you're going to tell is hilarious. I'm sorry if you're going for serious, but it just cracks me up. "Rumored to have lived for thousands of years." Obviously, Amethyst has made quite the impact on you. Have to see who else makes an impact on you and I hope this expands into a full blown forum comic. Though I heard it is being based on events on the servers from a particular night, but that would still be great. You look to be building up to a good story. Oh, and on that second page where it says "shrines were built in his image," the only image that you see is a giant pokeball so immediately I thought, "OH MY GOD AMETHYST IS ACTUALLY A POKEBALL! I [b]KNEW[/b] IT!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geo Posted July 13, 2010 Share Posted July 13, 2010 Goodluck will and nice pictures by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 13, 2010 Author Share Posted July 13, 2010 Thanks, geo! And AZKnight, I'ts supposed to be both serious and funny, but it's probably gonna lean more towards the funny-ish side. AmethystStorm, along with a few other members, have in fact made quite a bit of an impact on me, they all seem... interesting, i guess I could say... (and about the poke-ball, yeah i thought of that, but i wanted Storm to appear seldomly until around [spoiler]the end when he's found[/spoiler]) but it's only just a prologue so far, I'm sure it'll get better as time goes by, and progress is made! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 14, 2010 Author Share Posted July 14, 2010 Thank you [b]all[/b] for your support! Here's [b][i][u]Page 3[/u][/i][/b] Hope you enjoy it! [i](Remember: Ideas [b]and[/b] criticism [b][u]very[/u][/b] welcome!)[/i] http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/Infinitas-Pg3EDIT.jpg [b]EDITED for consistency.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stars Posted July 14, 2010 Share Posted July 14, 2010 I love your sneering face in the last panel. Seriously, it's awesome. I don't think I've heard us referred to as Reborn before, but I guess it makes sense based on the server name. Either way, it sounds better in this context than a town (or wherever) called Poke-Place. =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AZKnight Posted July 14, 2010 Share Posted July 14, 2010 You know he's evil because one of his eyes is hidden in shadows and because he has a prominent canine tooth. Spiffy! Yay trains! We really need to use them a lot more. Better sustainability than planes and their jet fuel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stars Posted July 14, 2010 Share Posted July 14, 2010 [quote name='AZKnight' post='964' date='Jul 14 2010, 01:01 AM']Yay trains! We really need to use them a lot more. Better sustainability than planes and their jet fuel.[/quote] [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nANtbPef8M8"]Reminded me.[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 15, 2010 Author Share Posted July 15, 2010 [quote name='AZKnight' post='964' date='Jul 14 2010, 01:01 AM']Yay trains! We really need to use them a lot more. Better sustainability than planes and their jet fuel.[/quote] Brilliant, I know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 15, 2010 Author Share Posted July 15, 2010 A Page a day!? Amazing!!! I don't think I've ever had such quick success on [b]any[/b] of my previous projects! Here's [b][i][u]Page 4[/u][/i][/b] Hope you enjoy it! [i](Remember: Ideas [b]and[/b] criticism [b][u]very[/u][/b] welcome!)[/i] [url="http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/Infinitas-Pg4.jpg"]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/S...finitas-Pg4.jpg[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted July 16, 2010 Author Share Posted July 16, 2010 This is tiring, I'm gonna take a break until Monday, until then, happy reading, and thanks for all of the support! Here's [b][i][u]Page 5[/u][/i][/b] Hope you enjoy it! [i](Remember: Ideas [b]and[/b] criticism [b][u]very[/u][/b] welcome!)[/i] [url="http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/SupahFish/plusInfinitas/Infinitas-Pg5.jpg"]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae189/S...finitas-Pg5.jpg[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stars Posted July 16, 2010 Share Posted July 16, 2010 Wild Miss Kitty appeared! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AZKnight Posted July 16, 2010 Share Posted July 16, 2010 Miss Kitty just exudes....I guess Moderator authority. I don't know how else to describe it. That or it's a look of "You're going to be my bitch." I think I'll stick with the former. Since I wasn't there when this story happened, still anticipating to see what happened. It's building up to something, but it seems like an epic battle. Did you guys have an epic battle without me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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