Cornerman Posted September 24, 2014 Share Posted September 24, 2014 Very wel done saber, the improvements are very good and well done It get wy you thought kuro's hood had to be bigger (so that it looks it fits over his big head) One thing with Vero's back sprite the 2nd on the right, the upper most 2rows of his collar look a bit akward fitting in with the 3th row If you would try ot to extend the upper most 2 rows with 3 or 2 pixels to the right perhaps It would look less akward....or if his collar is folded there then i get it or is it just me.. Also lucia's middel where the belt is on her 2th to the left sprite if you could extend her middle by 1 or 2 pixels she would look less...anorexic thin. Furthermore I think..... nothing, I can't find anything wrong/akward (in my eyes) with the rest Once again well done with these sprites their splendid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KnightZhroud Posted September 24, 2014 Share Posted September 24, 2014 Ohh someone's been busy. Do you mind when I'm done finishing my Wes sprites, to share my work here? By the end of this week I should be done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saber12 Posted September 27, 2014 Author Share Posted September 27, 2014 Sure Zhroud you're welcome to join in. I've done too much before posting so first let us begin with something new. Transitions! Vero Trevo's Vero Alice Violet Alice Twins? Not exactly.... ok maybe. I'm working on a slightly more violet color scheme for Alice. I noticed that in her original dress so I'm trying to see how it does here. Kuro Lucia They all had a few odd troubles for me here and there but I got through them in two days. I call victory for that. And now for the big guns. **fires the update cannon** Kabooom!!!!! Trainer Profiles Lucia -smile Lucia -"You call for me?" Lucia -excited Lucia -serious Well I didn't give her any optional emotions before so I wanted to give her some tool Vero -he's mad again Vero -ah you know same old Vero. Vero -took the man's shades Vero -thinks he's bad Alice Violet scheme -her usual self Alice Violet -serious Backsprite update A very light touch on his collar. There isn't much I can do for him now(at least I think) so I'll probably come back to him later if I get the chance. Of course if you must swipe Kuro's shades. I hope he's not too strange without them. Then again I can barely tell right now so if there's anything I can do to fix it let me know. Of course Kuro with no shades is optional. I edited her a little. There isn't that much of a difference except for a few pixels that I hope get her looking a bit better. You can tell me if she looks better with a dark violet or the gray black she had. If they look about the same that's ok to say too. I figured its best to speak less and let your critiques give me guidance. I've finished the transitions for the most part and I'm moving on to all the overworld sprites I have left. That includes surfing with the Sports gear. Until then comments, critiques and questions are welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheep Posted September 27, 2014 Share Posted September 27, 2014 You've done a great job with these. In my opinion violet>old one. Also, I wouldn't play around with facial expressions too much, I'd just leave them as the default ones but that's just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revman Posted September 27, 2014 Share Posted September 27, 2014 Wow, these look awesome! It'd be heaps cool if perhaps they were somehow implemented into the game as alternate costumes or something if possible, like for the Winter attire. Do you think you'll be doing any more for surfing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cornerman Posted September 27, 2014 Share Posted September 27, 2014 This looks fantastic, I don't see any fault......... It's perfect, wel done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foamy Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 I think it would be great to see these in future updates under Options settings, with a "Trainer Sprite" selection. You'd be able to switch between "Default," "Summer," and "Winter." Wonderful work, dude! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenshiD Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 Why is Kuro the only one with a hood? Why was Vero left out hood wise? XD Seriously though...I'm more of a hoodie person, I think it would look good aswell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saber12 Posted September 30, 2014 Author Share Posted September 30, 2014 Hey everyone I've been having a little trouble with adapting these alternate sprites to Ame's style so I might end up posting the overworld sprites at a slower pace than I was hoping to. Here's Alice: Walk Run There's also the fact that I didn't do so well at all for editing the bike sprites for the sports gear so I'll save those for last. I've also got a few updates on some things that I figured I could do better. Here: I don't think the sneakers looked like well sneakers at all which is why I thought I should fix this quickly. I was also thinking that black sneakers might look better on her. I mean I don't really know I just used to know some girls who wore black sneakers and sweats too so I'm just trying stuff out. Of course I'm looking to improve as I go along which is why I went back to update these. You've done a great job with these. In my opinion violet>old one. Also, I wouldn't play around with facial expressions too much, I'd just leave them as the default ones but that's just me. Well the expressions don't take much time at all.(unless its Alice) In this game, its true that having alternate expressions is unnecessary but I'm also using this as a warm up before I work on alternate expressions for bigger sprites. In this case, the practice is good since I have such a small space to work with. I want to try messing with the transitions soon. I also figured that the violet color of Alice would look better. Wow, these look awesome! It'd be heaps cool if perhaps they were somehow implemented into the game as alternate costumes or something if possible, like for the Winter attire. Do you think you'll be doing any more for surfing? Yep surfing will be done as well. However, I'm not worried about it at the moment because I noticed that I won't have to do much editing for the trainers. I should be able to do those very fast. This looks fantastic, I don't see any fault......... It's perfect, wel done I'll try to take a break from working on the bigger sprites but I'm bound to notice something strange sooner or later. I think it would be great to see these in future updates under Options settings, with a "Trainer Sprite" selection. You'd be able to switch between "Default," "Summer," and "Winter." Wonderful work, dude! I've been thinking about this as well. I honestly don't know what variables are used to load the sprites and how they're loading so they don't produce lag. I've had idea's myself but they might be too troublesome for this game. I'd probably try something simple like your suggestion as a test. That is when I've finished learning Ruby Scripting..... Why is Kuro the only one with a hood? Why was Vero left out hood wise? XD Seriously though...I'm more of a hoodie person, I think it would look good aswell I was looking at the fashion coats at the moment and almost decided to give neither of them a hood. I need more practice with making hoods anyways so maybe sometime in the future I'll try to make a better hoodie. Or I may try to swap some of their outfits.... This is a smaller update but it's also a way of me letting you guys know that I'm trying to improve while bringing out new stuff. I'm not the fastest character spriter out there but I don't want to send Ame too many pms knowing that she's very busy. Since it's fan made I guess that mean's I should keep trying to find the answers myself and from you guys right? I'll try to get all of the walk and run animations in first and finish up with the bike and surf animations afterwards. Until then comments, critiques and questions are welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saber12 Posted October 2, 2014 Author Share Posted October 2, 2014 I've had a rough time with figuring out how to start these so consider these overworld sprites rough concepts of what they should look like. Adapting to Ame's newer style of spriting will take time for me to do. I'm such a noob.... Vero Walkin with and without shades The man's a runnin He'll need some serious color work. I could imagine most of you saying that he looks like he's covered in black. I need to build up some form of contrast with his coat so he doesn't look like one giant pixel. Kuro just walkin Kuro running out of time I really would like it if I could like find some small separation between his coat and pants. The hood isn't how I imagined it although I needed to test something that would get me an idea of how to make these sprites again. Lucia walk it out girl Lucia running to first base I feel like I got the concept best with her. Now I just need to see what changes I can make to get her to look a little better. I can see now that I really need to work on editing overworld sprites. I'm not sure when I'll be able to update these yet but for now I'll try to add the rest in soon. Until then comments, critiques and questions are welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 *Slow claps while waiting for the crowd to join in* Phenomenal man... simply phenomenal. see, This is what you can do with some perseverance. You started from the bottom, now you here. These just look friggin amazing. you've come quite a ways since you first posted your ideas up here a while ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tringus Posted October 2, 2014 Share Posted October 2, 2014 Now I DEFINITELY can't wait for the rest. Fern's going to wish HE jumped off of Beryl Bridge once he sees me in new clothes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saber12 Posted October 6, 2014 Author Share Posted October 6, 2014 It's complete finally! Vero Surf Dive Bike I needed to at least lighten up his outfit a little. I'm ok with this for the time being. Lucia Walk Run Surf Dive I needed to make sure she didn't look like she was in princess Peaches outfit so she's a little thinner. Alice Surf I didn't see anything wrong at the moment so I went right ahead to finish her. Kuro Surf Dive Bike I think I may end up changing his appearance. By that I mean his outfit. I just don't think what I've done with Kuro can really be called an alternate outfit. If anything it looks the same except now he's got a bigger hood. Eventually, I started adding in more details so I'll see if I can still work with this design. What I'm working on : With this I was trying to give Lucia more detail. We can see her boots more clearly and the walk animation has less of a bounce to it. She's one pixel taller so compared to many characters in the game she's a little taller.(Serra's height) Overall,I like how this one came out. You can test this one if you like and I'm currently testing this with the other characters as well. The sports gear will get the surfing and dive animations in just hang on for while longer. I'm just glad I finished with putting all of them up finally. So please mess around and have fun with these. *Slow claps while waiting for the crowd to join in* Phenomenal man... simply phenomenal. see, This is what you can do with some perseverance. You started from the bottom, now you here. These just look friggin amazing. you've come quite a ways since you first posted your ideas up here a while ago. @Stratos Yeah I forgot how long ago it was when I started this topic. Now look at the mess I've made. xD I want to keep the old sprites up as a reminder to anyone and myself about taking that first step to creating something. It won't be perfect and it might not be satisfactory but one day you might make something that blows your mind. Now I DEFINITELY can't wait for the rest. Fern's going to wish HE jumped off of Beryl Bridge once he sees me in new clothes. @Trevo Go get em the set's here for starters! Thanks for the support everyone. I probably would've stopped if no one payed attention. I really appreciate the comments Until next time comments questions and critiques are welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saber12 Posted October 27, 2014 Author Share Posted October 27, 2014 (edited) I'm back and able to legitimately say that the Sports gear sprite set is complete as of episode 13. Here are the missing Tauros sprites and the surf/dive sprites. Let me explain something about the dive sprites. As of now they look exactly the same to me which is why I didn't copy and paste the dive sprites here. All you have to do is make a copy of the surf sprite you're using and rename the surf part to dive. Here ya go! Alice Surf/Dive Kuro Surf/Dive Lucia Surf/Dive Vero Surf/Dive A few updates I personally made: Alice Walk Her ponytail is redone. It looks very similar to Julia's. I sort of used her as a reference with the space I had. Alice Run Same thing here just the ponytail change except this is for her run cycle. Kuro Bike No being lazy this time. It's Kuro legitimately riding the bike rather than me just leaving tons of pixels the same. Well a lot still are but I said why not show more of his arms and indicate his shorts a little. Alice Bike No being lazy Saber. I made sure to make her outfit visible too the same way I did Kuro's. Lucia Bike No being lazy that's an order to Saber. Same thing applies here. I couldn't let the side sprites stay the way they were otherwise I wouldn't be doing anything worthy of calling any of these sprites different from the originals. It's funny how after I saw the mega evolution thread and the reborn fan art thread pop up, I was just about finished with working on these. I'll be bringing in the tauros riding sprites for the winter outfits too sometime soon. As for Decibel and Ari I'll need to wait until episode 14 comes out before I can start working on them but I'm open to suggestions for they're winter and summer outfits. PM's are fine as well. Until then comments, questions and critiques are welcome. Edited November 3, 2014 by Saber12 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheepMilks Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Im trying to save the Alice summer ones ;w; but for some reason it doesnt save right.. like it saves blank as a png, wont open in my sai or anything Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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